UNDER MY SKIN
I woke up in my state of ignorance
just to find the presence;
of your absence
I try so hard to cover the blisters
Pushing away the demons sleeping beside
but they just don’t go and crawl inside
smiting my soul;
Under my skin…
This comfort within me
has pushed itself away
My shadow down under
is so haunting…
The pace of my falling self control
is badly increasing…
almost deceiving; taking me down
to the deep down underground…
Yes! now I got
Something, looking over my back
Pulling my hand
swallowing me inside
I saw this thing before
every time, making me feel insecure
Every moment I breath
becomes another mistake to you
and every moment I waste
becomes a step that I should never take
Drenching in a rain of blood tears
falling just for me to taste…
This creepy feeling I have
got over me before
and everytime I bleed out
to throw away; the crushing
meteorite of memories inside
Am poisoned by your venom
Under my skin…
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wow...what more do i say??
cheers
sophia
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Hellooo BINA Mamm..
Hahahahaaa.. am ROFL... after reading your advice...!
Well snake charmers wont work... cos theres lotta inside... well I do see life in brightness ...dont worry... I like brightness.. though the poem was dark...
LOL!
thanxxx for coming and the outstanding advice..! haha
regards
Achi
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Achillees,
These lines of your poem i liked most............
I woke up in my state of ignorance
just to find the presence;
of your absence
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achi
pls get a snake charmer to rid u of this venom so that u can rejuvenate
n live life in brightness, banishing shadows
lol
bina
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HIiiiaaa Meera ...
Am good sweets....! Heyy why d hell will I curse you.... i aint that dumb...!
Thanxxxx for liking ma stuff... its good to see you here...
Will check your intoxication...
Hottt...! hehe
cheers n love
Achi
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Awwww...!!!! am scared... girl!
Your comment is more fiery and scary than ma post... heyy! chill thats just ma stylo an night crawler signature poem... i like devilish stuff... (heavy metal stuff you see!) and there's no SHE to be shreded...
Uhh! plsss am too tired now using the shredding machine at ma office... now not here plsss...!
I am at ma place of peace... got it back after a vaccumed interval...
thanxxx for sharing and the concern... am touched!
cheers n love
Sugs
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Claw at it and throw it out...this thing under your skin. It's causing you too much pain. Move on to a place of peace and calm. shred to bits the memories of her that poisons you...
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Hey,
How are you ?..don't curse me yet... :))
it is beautiful, think I have read couple of blogs - a spin off of this word "venom"
I also wrote one of Toxic relationship...
cool ;)
Meera
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